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    sentence check.

    hello,could you please proofread this sentence?

    The topic of my work placement consists of studies of loop controls in the workshop.

    thanks

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    Re: sentence check.

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    hello,could you please proofread this sentence?

    The topic of my work placement consists of studies of loop controls in the workshop.

    thanks
    The topic of my work placement is the study of loop controls in the workshop.

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    Re: sentence check.

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    hello,could you please proofread this sentence?

    The topic of my work placement consists of studies of loop controls in the workshop.

    thanks
    The object of my work placement is to study loop controls in the workshop.
    I'm not sure work placements have topics, do they?

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