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    sentence

    hello teachers,
    can you have a look at this sentence and tell me if it is fine as it stands.

    "With this new experience, it could help me to improve and prepare myself better to confront my future career."


    I'm unsure with the last part of the sentence.
    How would you express it if you disagreed with my sentence.

    thanks

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    Re: sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    hello teachers,
    can you have a look at this sentence and tell me if it is fine as it stands.

    "With this new experience, it could help me to improve and prepare myself better to confront my future career."


    I'm unsure with the last part of the sentence.
    How would you express it if you disagreed with my sentence.

    thanks
    The problem is not only the last part.

    "With this new experience" needs to come before "I" not "it" but why phrase it that way.

    This new experience will help me be better prepared for my future career.

    {not a teacher}

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