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    correct this paragrapg, please


    Fear is a quite difficult problem to overtake; it grips on minds of many of us. Fear prevents people from achieving their success and kills any opportunity or life chance. As a result, People lose the sense of life. Actually, people attempt to come over their fears which differ to variety of types and some of common of them are: fear of failure, fear of dying, and fear of loneliness.

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    Re: correct this paragrapg, please

    I think Searching for Language did this for you already in your other post.

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