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    broaden your mind

    Hi. First time posting here :) I am trying to write down my personal statement for applying in university courses. Any help with the following text is really appreciated.


    My studies in the Cognitive science broadened my way of thinking through collaboration with students of other fields of interest like psychology, biology, philosophy.

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    Re: broaden your mind

    Quote Originally Posted by dervast View Post
    Hi. First time posting here :) I am trying to write down my personal statement for applying in university courses. Any help with the following text is really appreciated.


    My studies in the Cognitive Science broadened my way of thinking through collaboration with students of other fields of interest like Psychology, Biology and Philosophy.
    It's OK.
    If you capitalise one subject, you should capitalise them all for consistency.

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    Re: broaden your mind

    Thanks for the reply. Can u also explain me why i should not use the article 'the'? I
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