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    • Join Date: Jul 2005
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    #1

    correct?

    Hi,

    Could you please proofread the following sentence:

    The thesis does not lack individual conclusion summarizing all the knowledge gained, which (meaning the knowledge) represents the achievement of the objective of this thesis.

    Thanks a lot!

    Hanka


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    #2

    Re: correct?

    Missed an article there,

    The thesis does not lack #AN# individual conclusion summarizing all the knowledge gained, which (meaning the knowledge) represents the achievement of the objective of this thesis.


    but a part from that looks ok.
    Best wishes,
    Sarah


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    #3

    Re: correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by sajacas View Post
    Missed an article there,

    The thesis does not lack #AN# individual conclusion summarizing all the knowledge gained, which (meaning the knowledge) represents the achievement of the objective of this thesis.


    but a part from that looks ok.
    Best wishes,
    Sarah
    Thanks a lot! And would it be possible to say: The thesis does not lack a personal conclusion? What's the difference between "personal conclusion" and "individual conclusion"?

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