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    Bulit between 2500B.C. and 1500 B.C., located elven kilometers to the north of Amesbury, Wiltshire, England, spanning over 1,000 years in the construction, stonehenge is the most well-preserved relic of megalithic structure in Europe.


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    Quote Originally Posted by puzzle View Post
    Bulit between 2500B.C. and 1500 B.C., located elven kilometers to the north of Amesbury, Wiltshire, England, spanning over 1,000 years in the construction, stonehenge is the most well-preserved relic of megalithic structure in Europe.
    Simple errors highlighted.

    You do not need "well-preserved relic". It is a megalithic structure.

    Also, best preserved rather than the awkward most well preserved.

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    Stonehenge is the best relic of megalithic structure in Europe.

    Stonehenge is the best megalithic structure relic in Europe.


    Do these sound good? Please.


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    Stonehenge is the best preserved megalithic structure in Europe.

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