A flamboyant entrance

Bassim

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I have tried to use "flamboyant entrance" in my sentence. I am not sure if my sentences sound natural, so please would you correct my mistakes?

Anna made a flamboyant entrance to the party. People stopped talking and all eyes turned towards her. With her extravagant hairstyle and multicoloured ethnic dress she was an original seldom seen in town.
 

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Anna made a flamboyant entrance [STRIKE] to [/STRIKE] at the party. People stopped talking and all eyes turned towards her. With her extravagant hairstyle and multicoloured ethnic dress, she was an original seldom seen in town.
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