A gaggle of journalists and a crowd of onlookers

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure if my sentence sound natural.

A gaggle of journalists and a crowd of onlookers have been waiting from the early morning in front of the actor's home to hear him making a statement regarding the charges against him for tax evasion.
 
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Bassim said:
I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure if my sentence sound natural.

A gaggle of journalists and a crowd of onlookers have been waiting in front of the actor's home [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] since [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] early [this] morning [STRIKE]in front of the actor's home[/STRIKE] to hear him [STRIKE]making[/STRIKE] make a statement regarding the charges against him for tax evasion.
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See above.
 
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