a letter:clear and understandable

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jkl

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[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']I wrote the following letter in two different ways. I am not sure which one is clear and understandable. Please correct these for me. THANK YOU.[/FONT]

[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Dear Jim,

Earlier you borrowed a Blockbuster DVD “Greatest Canadian". The DVD comes with 5 different volumes. However, you returned Vol.1-4 and Vol.5 has not been returned yet. It is due today, Feb.12, 2007. Thanks for your attention regarding this matter.[/FONT]


[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']You returned a DVD “Greatest Canadian” to Blockbuster today, Feb.-12-08. However, you borrowed 5 volumes and returned only Vol.1-4; Vol.5 has not been returned yet. The Item is due today. Thanks for your attention regarding this matter.[/FONT]
[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Thank you,[/FONT]
[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']L.[/FONT]
 

jkl

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I noticed some font problems in my earlier thread. Sorry about that.
 
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