A light sport plane which went missing

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

A light sport plane which went missing, was found the next day crashed in the mountains. The pilot, a man with more then 30 years of flying experience was found miraculously alive and with only one broken arm.
 
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Take the comma after missing (you don't need it there) and move it to after experience. I suggest you replace one broken arm with a broken arm.
 

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'A light sport plane' may be common elsewhere, but as far as I know, in the UK we only call it a 'light aircraft'.

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Light sport plane is a specific legal category in the United States. I don't know if it exists elsewhere.
 
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