About the usage of tense and words

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ramanji

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Some snaps were taken in the dressing room but all of them are not meant for family viewing. I also met with Lucy , a mutual friend of Suresh and mine at St.Xaviers School.

Please let me know whether the tense used in the sentence,"all of them are not meant for family viewing", is proper or not . Please correct the sentences if needed.
 

David L.

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the simple way of expressing this is:

"...dressing room, but none of them are meant for family viewing."
compare:
...but not all of them are meant for family viewing.
 
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