[General] accident

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meela

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My frined borrowed my car, while he was turing the car suddenly a motorcyclist has came on his way. He hit the pole to save the motorcyclist. My car had badly demaged and other hand my insurace has just expired before one day before accident. My friend is ready to compensate the loss of my car.

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My frined borrowed my car, while he was turing the car suddenly a motorcyclist has came on his way. He hit the pole to save the motorcyclist. My car had badly demaged and other hand my insurace has just expired before one day before accident. My friend is ready to compensate the loss of my car.

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My friend borrowed my car. As he was turning [a corner], a motorcyclist suddenly came towards him. To avoid the motorcyclist, he swerved and hit a pole. My car is badly damaged and my car insurance expired the day before the accident. My friend is willing to pay me compensation for the loss of my car.
 

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As you know Jania has hit my car to a pole and my car is in the workshop for denting a painting. It takes two to three weeks for the completion of denting and painting.

Dear Raj , is it possible for you to lend me your car for two weeks. I will return back your car when I receive it. It is difficult a get a taxi on daily basis it is very expensive.

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Dear Raj

As you know, Jania [STRIKE]has hit[/STRIKE] crashed my car into a pole and my car is in the workshop [STRIKE]for denting a painting[/STRIKE] to have the dents knocked out and for repainting. It will take two to three weeks for the completion of [STRIKE]denting and painting[/STRIKE] the repairs.

[STRIKE]Dear Raj ,[/STRIKE] Is it possible for you to lend me your car for two weeks? I will return [STRIKE]back[/STRIKE] your car when I [STRIKE]receive it[/STRIKE] get mine back. It is [STRIKE]difficult a[/STRIKE] very expensive to get a taxi on a daily basis. [STRIKE]it is very expensive.[/STRIKE]

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