[Essay] According to......

[ashley42430]

Some teachers said that the fact is not perfect to be a topic sentence, but some are not. I want to know the fact is good or bad for a topic sentence.

for example , according to this statistic,........

 

[tedtmc]

Some teachers said that the fact is not perfect to be a topic sentence, but some are not. I want to know the fact is good or bad for a topic sentence.

for example , according to this statistic,........

It is difficult to understand what you have said.
What fact are you talking about?

 

[ashley42430]

For example, according to this statistic, more than 65% people consider that restaurants should be prohibited smoking.