After a divorce, many people suffer

[Bassim]

Would you please help me with these sentences and correct my mistakes? Is it correct to start after "empty" with "but not Maria whose wings..." or do I need to add something like "but it was not the case with Maria whose wings grew strong..."

After a divorce, many people suffer and feel empty, but not Maria whose wings grew strong and she felt free like a bird. She immediately undertook a trip around the world and had a time of her life.

 

[teechar]

Would you please help me with these sentences and correct my mistakes? Is it correct to [STRIKE]start[/STRIKE] write [STRIKE]after "empty" with[/STRIKE] "but not Maria whose wings..." after "empty", or do I need to add something like "but it was not the case with Maria whose wings grew strong..."?

After a divorce, many people suffer and feel empty, but not Maria, whose wings grew strong and [STRIKE]she[/STRIKE] who felt free like a bird. She immediately [STRIKE]undertook a trip[/STRIKE] went traveling around the world and had the time of her life.

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