After a spate of misjudgements and blunders

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure if my punctuation is correct either.

After a spate of misjudgements and blunders, the whole country seemed to be tired of the president, even his wife, who, every evening, locked him out of their bedroom.

 

[teechar]

After a [STRIKE]spate[/STRIKE] string of misjudgements and (political/personal) blunders by the president, thewhole country seemed to be tired of him. [STRIKE]the president,[/STRIKE] Even his wife, [STRIKE]who, every evening, locked[/STRIKE] started locking him out of their bedroom.

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