After a tragic train accident

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

After a tragic train accident, a stream of injured passengers poured into the city hospitals.
 

Lynxear

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I would only change "a" to "the" at the beginning.

After the tragic train accident, a stream of injured passengers poured into the city hospitals.

This would make your statement specific to a single tragic event. I like your creative use words here. You are going beyond constructing mundane sentences.
 
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