After almost a year of waiting

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

After almost a year of waiting, Bob received a transplanted kidney. This was his third transplantation because the two previous kidneys had failed already after a few months.
 

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Bob would receive (or, more precisely, undergo) a kidney transplant.

Already doesn't work in the second sentence.
 

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After waiting (for) almost a year, Bob underwent/had his third kidney transplant. The previous kidneys (he'd received) failed within a few months of being transplanted.
 
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