After hours of negotiations

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

After hours of negotiations, the police manged to coax the man who wanted to commit suicide to climb off the bridge.
 

emsr2d2

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

After hours of [STRIKE]negotiations[/STRIKE] negotiation, the police managed to coax the suicidal man [strike]who wanted to commit suicide to climb[/strike] off the bridge.

See above.
 
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