After hours of negotiations

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

After hours of negotiations, the police manged to coax the man who wanted to commit suicide to climb off the bridge.

 

[emsr2d2]

I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

After hours of [STRIKE]negotiations[/STRIKE] negotiation, the police managed to coax the suicidal man [strike]who wanted to commit suicide to climb[/strike] off the bridge.

See above.