After living in a busy city for a while

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

After living in a busy city for a while, Anna found herself longing for her house in a quiet village on the coast.
 

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Does she already own this house in a quiet village?
 

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Yes. She does.
 

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I think she missed rather than longed for the house.
 

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Missing the house made her long for it.
 

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I'm OK with "longed" but I'd probably say she longed to move back to her other house.
 

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I think the sentence works.
 
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