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Bassim

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Please, would you correct these two sentences.

1. After spending years in politics, he had learnt to manipulate the masses who never understood what was going on.
2. After becoming a widow, she had dedicated her time to her hobbies, which alleviated her loss and pain.
 

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They look good to me.

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bhaisahab

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I'd put a comma after "masses".
 
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