After ten years of marriage

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

After ten years of marriage, Bob and Gina felt their marriage was foundering, and they decided to seek counselling to save it.

 

[emsr2d2]

To avoid using "marriage" twice, you could use "relationship" in place of the second one. You don't really need to say "to save it" at the end. That's normally the reason couples go to relationship/marriage counselling.