After the outbursts

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Bassim

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Please, would you take a look at these sentences and correct my mistakes.

1.After the outbursts of rage, I feel empty and exhausted as if after hard work.
Or should I maybe write:
2.After the outbursts of rage, I feel empty and exhausted as if I have done hard work.
 

Rover_KE

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They're OK.
 
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