[Grammar] Alan carefully wrapped Tim's hands with pieces of his shirt

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Ferdie11

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Hi,

Whose pieces of shirt were wrapped to Tim's hands in the sentence below?

Alan carefully wrapped Tim's hands with pieces of his shirt.

Many thanks.
 

bertietheblue

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Hi,

[STRIKE]Whose [/STRIKE]Pieces of whose shirt were wrapped around [STRIKE]to [/STRIKE]Tim's hands in the sentence below?

Alan carefully wrapped Tim's hands with pieces of his shirt.

Many thanks.

It's unclear and so needs rephrasing according to the intended meaning. I don't like 'pieces' either - I think 'strips'.
 
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