All Alison's relationships broke down

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

All Alison's relationships broke down in quick succession, and she wondered why she fell for "wrong" men.
 
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"in quick succession" doesn't really work there. Do you mean that each one of her relationships broke down soon after they started? You need the definite article before "wrong men".
 
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You may mean Alison's relationships always broke down.
 
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Yes. I mean Alison's relationship always broke down.

Would my sentence be correct like this.

Alison's relationships always broke down quickly, and she wondered why she fell for the "wrong" men.
 
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That's OK.
 
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