All of a sudden bell rings and school is over.

tufguy

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The film starts with the shot of a teacher teaching the students at school. She is being nice to the kids. All of a sudden bell rings and school is over. Kids leave for a long weekend.

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teechar

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Use "the bell" and "the kids."
 

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Also "a shot" unless you have previously discussed the scene.
 
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