An enormous sinkhole

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence makes sense in English.

The author describes the corrupt country as an enormous sinkhole in which you put billions of dollars and they all disappear without a trace.
 

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I'd write "...into which you pour billions of dollars which vanish without a trace."
 
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