Red5 said:
A webpage I'm working on currently has the following phrase included in it, and I'm not too sure that it's correct:
... is a quality and service oriented manufacturer of pressure and temperature test and measuring equipment for all applications.
Basically, it is describing three kinds of equipment:
pressure test
temperature test
measuring equipment
How would you punctuate and/or rewrite this?
I read that as two types: equipment that tests and measures temperature and equipment that tests and measures pressure.
Were it two types, I would write:
is a quality and service oriented manufacturer of equipment that tests and measures temperature or pressure for all applications.
If there are three types (what does the measuring equipment measure?), I would write:
is a quality and service oriented manufacturer of pressure and temperature testing equipment and of measuring equipment for all applications.
That doesn't tell me what the measuring equipment measures, however.
