[Grammar] Animal, research, life!

[ladyTL]

Sometimes when seeing animal research in TV-shows, I become really mad. Who has decided that the life of animal is less precious than ours? Do we really have the rights to govern its life in order to find cures?

 

[Gillnetter]

Sometimes when seeing animal research in TV-shows, I become really mad. Who has decided that the life of animal is less precious than ours? Do we really have the rights to govern its life in order to find cures?

And...your question about language is?

 

[ladyTL]

If the grammar is correct.

 

[emsr2d2]

Sometimes when I see[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] animal research [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] on TV[STRIKE]-shows[/STRIKE], I become really mad. Who has decided that the life of an animal is less precious than ours? Do we really have the [STRIKE]rights[/STRIKE] right to govern [STRIKE]its life[/STRIKE] animals' lives in order to find cures?

Please see my amendments above. Personally, I would remove "Sometimes" at the beginning. If you are going to give a strong opinion about something, then it is likely that it makes you feel like that all the time so "When I see animal research on TV ..." would be better. I would also use "get", not "become", or "it makes me really angry". However, your version is not grammatically incorrect so I have left it.