Anna's husband became exasperated

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Anna's husband became exasperated as he stood for more than an hour in the shop watching her trying on dozens of pairs of shoes. And still, she was undecided which pair to pick.
 

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Put a comma after "shop", and consider using "buy" instead of "pick."
 
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