[General] Any room for improvement in better English version?

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As a news editor and reporter, she specializes in reports on the World Expo. Her stories recorded the growth of the Expo Park, from contract signings and ground breaking ceremonies, to the completion of venues.

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If I suggest that 'Her stories recorded' be replaced by 'She witnessed' to make it sound better, would it be good advice? Thank you.

 

[emsr2d2]

As a news editor and reporter, she specializes in reports on the World Expo. Her stories recorded the growth of the Expo Park, from contract signings and ground breaking ceremonies, to the completion of venues.

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If I suggest that 'Her stories recorded' be replaced by 'She witnessed' to make it sound better, would it be good advice? Thank you.

You can use "she witnessed" but that doesn't explain that she then reported on them. It only shows that she was present in person at the events.