Are these sentences correct?

Status
Not open for further replies.
Z

Zoe2008

Key Member
Joined
Jan 16, 2008
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Korean
Home Country
South Korea
Current Location
China
We shall arrange the shipment after receiving your LC. Please expedite it to us.

I added two shipment in the attached report and highlighted in blue for your checking.
 
I

ianhood

Member
Joined
Mar 1, 2010
Member Type
Other
Native Language
English
Home Country
England
Current Location
New Zealand
The first sentence is good. In the second sentence "shipment" should be plural because there are two shipments, and the word "them" after "highlighted" would be better.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top