Are these two sentences correct? Thank you!

[Harry12345]

Are these two sentences correct? Thank you!

1 The book accounts more for the failure of our fellow students.
2 He has taken away my heart.

 

[albertino]

Are these two sentences correct? Thank you!

1 The book accounts more for the failure of our fellow students.
2 He has taken away my heart.

(Not a teacher)
(1) Most of our fellow students have flunked(US)/failed(UK) in book accounts.
(2) He has swept away my heart or he has broken my heart.

 

[Harry12345]

Teacher albertino！

Thank you very much!

Are they correct or incorrect on earth?:roll:

 

[albertino]

Teacher albertino！

Thank you very much!

Are they correct or incorrect on earth?:roll:

(I'm NOT A Teacher)

As for your sentences, it seems that the first one doesn't make sense while the second one is fine to me.