As I waited for the appointment

[Bassim]

Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentences?

As I waited for the appointment, a bearish-looking man came inside and sat on a chair, which seemed too small for him. He picked a glossy magazine from the table with his large hands and gave a deep yawn, which drew everyone's attention to him.

 

[emsr2d2]

Would you please correct the mistakes in my sentences?

As I waited for [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] my appointment, a bearish-looking man came inside and sat on a chair (no comma here) which seemed too small for him. He picked up a glossy magazine from the table with his large hands and gave a deep yawn, [STRIKE]which drew[/STRIKE] drawing everyone's attention​ to him.

See above. I've left "bearish-looking" because, even though I don't like it, it's quite evocative. I would probably say "a tall, hairy man"!

 

[Rover_KE]

I'd say 'bearlike'.