as I wrote the story

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azz

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Can one say:
The second sentence is the same in all of them. Only the first one changes.


a. As I wrote the story, it ends with the death of the main character. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.

b. The way I wrote the story, it ends with the death of the main character. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.

c. The story, as I wrote it, ends with the death of the main character. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.


d. As I wrote the story, the main character dies at the end. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.

e. In the story, as I wrote it, the main character dies at the end. But when they made a movie based on the book, they changed the ending.


Many Thanks.
 

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You have received a number of good answers to your question here.

If our own members have something to add, they can do so. Otherwise they can save their time.

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