As Peter lay in hospital, recovering

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

As Peter lay in hospital, recovering from heart attack, he imagined his wife embracing another man, and he felt as if his weak heart would burst with pain.
 
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Peter was recovering from a heart attack.

The second subject pronoun and the comma before it are unnecessary.
 
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