As Peter locked his door

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. I have tried to use "fall on" in my sentence.

As Peter locked the door and stepped into the street, a group of teenagers fell on him, kicking and hitting him. They ran away with his wallet and mobile phone.
 

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The phrasal verb 'fall on' is rarely heard in modern English.

Instead, say attacked or assaulted.
 
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