As Phil was reading a newspaper

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

As Phil was reading a newspaper in the library, a woman sitting opposite gave him glances. He knew he had seen her before, but could not remember where.
 

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

[STRIKE]As[/STRIKE] While Phil was reading a newspaper in the library, a woman sitting opposite [STRIKE]gave[/STRIKE] kept glancing at him. [STRIKE]glances.[/STRIKE] He knew he had seen her before, but could not remember where.

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The second comma isn't needed.
 
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