Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?
As the train trundled through the sunlit countryside, I watched through the window the golden cornfields rippling in the wind like sea waves.
As the train trundled through the sunlit countryside, I watched through the window the golden cornfields rippling in the wind like sea waves.
