[General] Asking about structure in the sentence

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Hi! I have few questions about the structure in the sentences.

1) In order to mean : "The revenues of the group from fixed rent revenues"

Can I write that:

"The Group's fixed rental income"

2) In order to mean : "....from the continuation of Y project development in Serbia "

Can I write that:

"....from Y project development continuation in Serbia"

3) By the way there is other appropriate word to say "continuation"?


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Hi! I have few questions about the structure in the sentences.

1) In order to mean : "The revenues of the group from fixed rent revenues"

Can I write that:

"The Group's fixed rental income"

2) In order to mean : "....from the continuation of Y project development in Serbia "

Can I write that:

"....from Y project development continuation in Serbia"

3) By the way there is other appropriate word to say "continuation"?


Thanks

Can you please help with the Questions?
 

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1 is fine, but it's a phrase and not a sentence.
2 is a mess- is this an extension of the project?

Please be patient- people will help you, but it's done on a volunteer basis and there are many questions being asked.
 

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1 is fine, but it's a phrase and not a sentence.
2 is a mess- is this an extension of the project?

Please be patient- people will help you, but it's done on a volunteer basis and there are many questions being asked.


1- I put commas only to mark the sentence I want to write. It's not a pharse.
2- I want to say ,they also got revenue because they continue with the development of the project

This is the full sentence

"The increase derived from new assets acquisition during the period under review and from P project development continuation in Serbia."

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