[General] At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job because of being separated

ambitious-girl

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Hi,

Could you please check this sentence?

At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job in consequence of being separated from people who I had know for years. However, at the end, I got used to my new working environment.
 

teechar

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At first, I felt isolated and unhappy in my new job [STRIKE]in consequence[/STRIKE] as a result of being separated from my previous colleagues [STRIKE]people who[/STRIKE] whom I had known and worked with for years. However, at the end, I got used to my new working environment.
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emsr2d2

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I'd use "in the end", not "at the end".
 

Tarheel

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Ambitious-girl, try:

However, I eventually got used to my new working environment.
 
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