At the wedding, people enjoyed

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

At the wedding, people enjoyed themselves but for the bride, who was downcast and didn't touch either her drink or food. She seemed to become invisible. No one paid her any attention or talked to her.
 

emsr2d2

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

At the wedding, [STRIKE]people[/STRIKE] everyone enjoyed themselves [STRIKE]but for[/STRIKE] except the bride, who was downcast and didn't touch either her drink or food. She seemed to [STRIKE]become[/STRIKE] be invisible. No one paid her any attention or talked to her.

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teechar

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I would use "food or drink" and connect the last two sentences with an appropriate conjunction.
 
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