[Grammar] back away

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Ashiuhto

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Are the following list acceptable? Please help check them. Thanks!

1. Back away from social intercourse:Your way of dealing with the same generation or grownup has difficulties/problems.
2. While using the social media, you feel delighted or pleasant.
3. You desire to spend more and more hours using the social media.
 

emsr2d2

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Are the following list acceptable? Please help check them. Thanks!

1. You back away from social intercourse:[STRIKE]Your way of[/STRIKE] You find dealing with [STRIKE]the same[/STRIKE] your own generation or grownups [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]difficulties/problems[/STRIKE] difficult or problematical.
2. While using [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] social media, you feel [STRIKE]delighted or pleasant[/STRIKE] very happy or ecstatic.
3. You [STRIKE]desire[/STRIKE] want to spend more and more hours using [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] social media.

On the assumption that you don't want them to be complete sentences, I have made some amendments above.
Note that you don't need the definite article before "social media".
 
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