Bea moved to a little town on the coast

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Bea moved to a little town on the coast and turned her back to a life of drugs and alcohol. After smog-filled London air, the sea and the fresh air were balm for her soul.
 

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Bea moved to a little town on the coast and turned her back [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] on a life of drugs and alcohol. After the smog-filled London air, the sea and [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] fresh air were balm for her soul.

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