Bea tried on her party dresses

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Bea tried on her party dresses the whole afternoon. In the end, she became so frustrated that she decided not to go to the party after all.
 

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I would use "spent the whole afternoon trying on her party dresses" and "got frustrated" in the above.
 
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