Because of the production error

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

Because of the production error, the launch of the new BMW model has been delayed.
 

emsr2d2

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If the reader/listener already knows what this production error is, the first "the" is OK. If not, use "a production error".
 

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Once again, the sentence would be smoother if you reversed the clauses and left out the comma.
 
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