Before entering the court

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Before entering the court, Michael looked at himself in the windowpane and righted his clothes. He was dressed in a dark suit and a dark tie, which he both borrowed from his friend David. His boss accused him of stealing the company's money, and Michael was keen to present himself as a well-mannered man.
 
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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Before entering the court, Michael looked at [STRIKE]himself[/STRIKE] his reflection in the [STRIKE]windowpane[/STRIKE] window and [STRIKE]righted[/STRIKE] adjusted his clothes. He was dressed in a dark suit and [STRIKE]a dark[/STRIKE] tie, both of which he [STRIKE]both[/STRIKE] had borrowed from his friend David. His boss had accused him of stealing the company's money, and Michael was keen to present himself as an [STRIKE]well-mannered[/STRIKE] honest (morally upright) man.

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