belly laugh

[WUKEN]

Hello teachers:
I am learning the term "belly laugh".
Here is my try "When I saw Mary laugh with belly laugh, it makes me release."

Could you take a look at it?
thanks a lot!

 

[Gnome]

Hello WUKEN, I'm not a teacher, but I hope that my advice helps!

"When I saw Mary laugh with belly laugh, it makes me release."

It was a decent try. I wouldn't repeat the word laugh though, and you should try to avoid passive voice. I'd write something like this: "When I saw Mary's belly laugh, I was relieved."

I hope this helps.

 

[WUKEN]

Thanks a lot!
It's helpful!