Birds Flying in Line With Feathers So Fine

[Blue Bird]

I found this poem while i was surfing the net.
Hope u find it enjoyable as i did:-D

Five blue birds sitting in a tree,
The first bird said, "Look what I see."
The second bird said, " Look what I see."
The third bird said, "Their feathers are so fine."
The fourth bird said, "Quick, let's fly away!"
The fifth bird said, "No, let's all stay."
Then a black bird said, "Let's win!"
"Join us, and we will be ten."

Well, all the birds flew together
In all kinds of weather.
Through the blue sky,
All ten would fly.
Till own birth brith summer day,
The blue birds in the tree did stay.
The black birds kept flying in line,
Leaving their new friends to pine.
Once again they wer five and five!
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[penelope87]

Ohh! So cute!!! ^^
This is your poem, Blue Bird!!! :-D

This is a great poem to tell to native children, mainly if they are learning colors or learning how to count. ;-)

 

[Blue Bird]

Well, I wish T.T

I wish if i could write like this one or better T.T

 

[Devil's tear]

Well, I wish T.T

I wish if i could write like this one or better T.T

I want to see your writing. Don't feel shy.​

 

[Blue Bird]

um, I want to.... but I lack the skills to write a poem T.T

I have searched about how to write a good poems, visited the sites and followed the princilples of writing poetry, but whenever I write a poem and then read it, it sounds sooooo stupid >,<

I feel that it is not easy to write a poem:-(

 

[Devil's tear]

um, I want to.... but I lack the skills to write a poem T.T

I have searched about how to write a good poems, visited the sites and followed the princilples of writing poetry, but whenever I write a poem and then read it, it sounds sooooo stupid >,<

I feel that it is not easy to write a poem:-(

Well, I was too bad in writing. My writing was too funny lol. And until now I'm not so good(much better than my past writing) but I don't feel shy. You should be courageous boy.
Yalla I want to see your writing even if you send it as a private message.
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