Bob had been drinking since his

Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct.

Bob had been drinking since his teens, but when he could not begin a day without a drink, he had to admit he had become an alcoholic. This realisation gave him angst, which he washed down with another drink.
 

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They're okay, but you might want to replace, "but when he could not...", with, "but when he could no longer...".
 
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