Bob lived rather uneventful life

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Bob lived rather uneventful life, spending his time between his home and his grey office.
 

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Not a teacher.

You need the indefinite article, "… a rather uneventful life…".

"… spending his time between his home and his grey office."
You can delete the second "his" to avoid the repetition.

Other possibilities.
"Bob lived a rather uneventful life, dividing his time between home and his grey office."
"Bob lived a rather uneventful life, spending his time at home and at his grey office."
 
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It reads like he usually went to his gray office but occasionally went to the purple one. I'd use an unambiguous adjective to describe the office.
 

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GoesStation,
I am wondering what you mean with an unambiguous adjective.
Should I write instead "his small office" or "his cramped office"?
 

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Those would work. The trouble with gray is that it can mean dull, lifeless or it can be a nondescript color. I think you intended the former meaning, but the reader might understand the latter.
 

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Note: BE grey=AE gray
 

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My predictive keyboard said gray, but I think "grey" is also okay in American English.
 
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